How about this?

Title for your next story: "Derek and Jane get laid"
Story told from two diverging perspectives, Derek's and Janes, about two people's pre-date activities and anticipatory thoughts about the sex they're about to have that night. Ends with the two diverging characters meeting up at prearranged somewhere.

Maybe with a tougue-in-cheek tone, sarcastic yet insightful (of course from make-belief insights) about the modern day mating rituals. Maybe written in a journal/blog format, with date and time openings for multimple short paragraphs. Derek not masturbating since their last date. Jane shaving her legs. Derek picking out boxer briefs and button flies because his erection against the zipper hurts him. Leg-man Breast-man Ass-man all like Jane. Eating grapefruit to make his cum smell better. Probably some description of their previous date where some make-out session was conducted. Derek sending Jane flowers on-line with point and click(pressing ctrl-n opening a second window next to espn). Jane's reactions to the flowers. Jane picking out a new bracelet. Imaginations/idealizations of what the date might be. Heat fel under the table. Footsie. Derek thinking that the bracelet looks like a cock-ring. These and other plot elements.